Face Engine

Vincent Valois sat silently on the Apocalyptican throne, staring at his minions. He took out his pocket watch, an antique over one hundred years old, handcrafted by an old acquaintance ...

Oh ja, as Forever Threnody said, that's completely normal, and necessary.

I've started a discussion thread.

If you have any questions or other comments regarding the Exodus storybook please post them here. At some point I'll post the current character list and brief descriptions of the ...

"Christ!" murmured Kerry, a saying he picked up from some 1st generation's, but had no idea what meant. Great start! -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------

*Hey Face Engine, mind if I claim the Captain for my female character, Yumi?* Sure, why not? I would post the first post, but I'm a bit busy at the ...

We've currently got three authorities, two uppers and six guns. Which leave the uppers a bit outnumbered, but nevermind. Seeing as I've currently only got one character, an authority, I'll ...

Previous Name: Lev Vladimirovich Current Name: Isaac Silver Age: 19 Gender: Male Who: Second Life Appearance: In all of Isaac's clear memories of him, Lev was young, with long, messy ...

Nay. TPBM is going to say "no".

Thanks for your reviews, I'll see what I can do about improving this - I have to agree that there is too much dialogue, but by the time I realised ...

Wait, do you mean two more characters (as you have done), or two including our first characters? I'll create one for now and another if I'm supposed to create two ...

I quite liked this poem, but I wasn't sure what to make of the structure. It seemed a bit all over the place - which doesn't have to be a ...

Because I have a tendency to start stories and then stop when I "lose the mood", I've decided to make my stories short, but with potential to be expanded. That's ...

Well that's......different. It's comical, yet still tragic enough to make me feel sorry for this fishophiliac (is that an okay alternative spelling?). It's also somewhat horrifying. However, I have to

Humm......7/10.